[诸葛妙计]
以写人为主的记叙文，应该注意人物的基本信息介绍及肖像描写、兴趣爱好描写、行为描写等。在介绍人物的基本信息时，通常要介绍人物的年龄、职业、籍贯等。
在描写人物的肖像时，通常会描写其外貌特征，如:身材、体形、头发(长短、颜色、发型)、脸型肤色、眼睛、衣着、表情等等。在描写时不必面面俱到，一般要 抓住人物比较明显的特征来描述。在描写人的外貌时,用一般现在时。
在描写兴趣爱好时，可以谈一谈他/她的情趣爱好、个性特征等。描写行为时，要注意根据你所描写的事情发生的时间，使用正确的时态。
[精彩美文]
Yao Ming— My Favorite Star
Everyone knows Yao Ming—a great basketball player. He comes from Shanghai and all the Chinese people are proud of him. He is my favorite star.
Yao Ming was born in 1980. He is tall and strong--he is 2. 26 metres tall. People call him"Little Giant”".
He likes playing basketball and he works hard at it. In his free time, he likes playing computer games and getting online. Sometimes he chats with his fans online. He is always polite and helpful. I hope that I can be a basketball player like Yao Ming one day!
姚明——我最喜爱的明星
人人都知道姚明—— 一个了不起的篮球运动员。他来自上海,所有中国人都以他为荣。他是我最喜爱的明星。
姚明出生于1980年,他又高又壮有2.26 米那么高，人们都叫他“小巨人”。
他喜欢打篮球而且练习很刻苦。空闲的时候他喜欢玩电脑游戏和上网。有时他在网上和自己的球迷聊天,他总是很有礼貌而且乐于助人。
希望有一天我也能成为一个像姚明一样的篮球运动员!
[名师点评]
这是一篇写人的记叙文。它的亮点在于简明扼要地描述了一个形象生动的人物。
第一段点明了人物的姓名( Yao Ming)、职业( a basketball player)、籍贯( Shanghai)，并说明了喜欢这个人物的原因，用了一个很好的短语be proud of sb.
第二段介绍了他的年龄身材。其中重点描述了他的突出特点——高,还写出了人们对他的称呼:小巨人。笔墨虽少，但描写生动。
第三段描写了他的兴趣 ( playing basketball computer games)、个性特征(polite andhelpful),使姚明的生动形象跃然纸上。
第四段描述了自己的愿望，事实上是另一种点题形式，说明了自己对姚明的崇拜。
【词句背吧】
1.描述相貌的短语:
good-looking好看的
a round/ square/long face-张圆/方/长脸
a handsome boy一个英俊的男孩子
have red/brown hair长着红/棕发
have straight/curly hair 留着直/卷发
have a ponytail 扎着马尾辫
have long black hair留着长长的黑发
have two bunches留着两个辫子
with long hair 留着长发
have dark -brown eyes长着深棕色的眼睛
wear a pair of glasses 带着眼镜
wear a smile面带笑容
have a flat nose长着扁平的鼻子
wear a beard留着胡子
a pretty/ beautiful/ charming girl 一个漂亮的/有魅力的女孩
2.描述体型的短语:
tall and strong又高又壮
short and fat又矮又胖
of medium height中等身材
small and skinny又小又瘦
1.78 metres tall 身高1.78米
with long arms and legs长着长胳膊长腿
3.描述个性特征的短语:
polite and helpful礼貌且乐于助人
hard-working勤奋的
generous and patient 既慷慨又有耐心
have a strong will 有着坚强的意志
humorous and creative 既幽默又富有创造力
4.描述兴趣爱好的短语:
play computer games玩电脑游戏
play cards/ chess/football打牌/下棋/踢足球
play the piano/violin弹钢琴/拉小提琴
chat with friends 和朋友聊天
watch TV/films看电视/电影
go swimming去游泳
be good at ... /do well in ...擅.....在.....做得好
5.句子:
She is a pretty gird with ...她是.... 某外貌特 征)的漂亮女孩。
He is ... and ready to help ohers.他很..... (菜个性特征)而且乐于助人。
We are proud of this .. boy我们为这....某个性特征)的男孩感到骄傲。
He... at the ageof .. ....年龄)岁的时候开始.... (某种活动或爱好)。
He used to... last year.他去年经常.... (兴趣爱好或习惯)。
6.段落赏吧
★ Wang Lihong is a handsome guy. He is very good at singing. He loves music. He can play the piano, the guitar and the violin. He has many good ideas about music. He is always busy. He likes singing for the people in different countries,
王力宏是一个英俊的小伙子。他很擅长唱歌。他热爱音乐。他会弹钢琴，弹吉他、拉小提琴。他对音乐有很多好的想法。他总是忙碌着，他喜欢为各国的人们歌唱。
★Jim is a fifeen-year-old boy. He is not very tall but he is strong. He is a member of the swimming Club. He swims once a week.He likes flying kites at the weekend. He is good at maths and is a good helper of our teachers.
吉姆是一个15岁的男孩，他不是很高，但很强壮。他是游泳俱乐部的一名成员。他每周游泳一次。他喜欢在周末放风筝。他很擅长数学，是老师们的好帮手。
7.优秀范文
Our Monitor
①Ou monitor is 15 years od. His name is Ge Yang, but we always call him“Sun”，because he is a“sunny boy".
②He is a tall and thin boy. He thas big eyes, a flat nose and a smal mouh. He has shortblack hair. He can't see things clearly, so he often wears glasses.
③He likes music very much and he is very good at it. He often listes to music atler school.④He is helpful and he likes helping others. ⑤So we all like him.
点评:
①第一段简明地告知班长的姓名(Ge Yang)，年龄(15 years od)，还通过他的绰号(Sun)说明了别人对他的喜爱。
②第二段主要是外貌描写。文中描写了他的体型特点( tall and thin)，五官特征(bigeyes; a flat nose; a small mouth )
③这句话表述了他的爱好(is good at music)。
④本句表述了他的个性特征(helpful)。
⑤通过上述几个方面的描写，说明了大家对他的看法( all like him)。
译文:
我们的班长
我们的班长15岁了，他的名字叫葛阳,但我们都喊他“太阳”，因为他是一个阳光男孩。他又高又瘦。有一双大眼睛，扁平的鼻子，小小的嘴巴，留着黑短发。他视力不好，所以经常带着眼镜。
他非常喜欢音乐而且很擅长。放学后他经常听音乐。他很乐于助人，喜欢帮助别人。所以我们都很喜欢他。
8.[真题考场]
假如你是李强，你的美国笔友Shirley正在学习汉语。她在给你的来信中介绍了她的汉语老师的情况。请根据以下信息用英语写一封信，向她介绍你的英语老师MissLi。
①Appearance（外貌）：tall, slim, smart
②Favorite color（最喜欢的颜色）：
blue
③Hobbies（习惯爱好）：
reading, traveling
④Personality（个性）：
helpful, patient
⑤Achievements（成绩）：
first prize in the teaching competition
要求:
1.词数80左右。信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息;
3.根据所给信息作适当发挥，要求条理清楚，语意连贯，字迹工整。
Dear Shirley，
Thank you for telling me somehing ahout your Chinese teacher. l think he has a good sense of humour. Now let me tell you something about my English teacher, Miss Li.
_______________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely ，Li Qiang
【练一练】
作文题目:
My Best Friend
Roger Federer —the New Tennis King
Roger Federer was born in Switzerland in 1981. He is very handsome and is 1. 85 metres tall. Helikes tennis very much. He spends much time practicing it every day.
“Roger Federer will be world No. 1.”Sampras said this in 2000. Sampras was the best tennis player at that time. And Federer was only 19 years then.
In 2003，Federer won the Wimbledon Open. In 2004，he won the Open again. And he became the No. 1 player in the world. In 2005，Federer was still the winner of the Open.
The Swiss young man was very happy. “It's the third time. So it's very special. ”Federer beat Andy Roddick in the final.“Andy is a great player. But I did play my best.
Federer has good skills. “I seldom make mistakes in the game. So I can always win. ”
Federer likes lions very much. “Lions are great animals. No other animals can beat them. So I want to be a‘ lion', too.
罗杰.费德勒一新的网球王
罗杰.费德勒1981年出生于瑞士。他相貌英俊，身高一米八五。他非常喜欢网球，每天花很长时间练习。
“罗杰。费德勒会成为世界第一。”2000年，桑普拉斯说过这样的话。桑普拉斯是当时最出色的网球选手。那时费德勒只有19岁。
2003年，费德勒赢得温布尔登网球公开赛的冠军。2004 年，他在温网比赛中卫冕成功。而且他已经成为了世界排名第一的网球选手。2005年,温网男单冠军依然属于他。
这个瑞士小伙子很高兴。“这是我第三次(获得这个比赛的冠军)，因此它很特别。”费德勒在决赛中击败了安迪。罗迪克。“安迪是一位出色的选手,但我的确打出了自己的最高水平。”
罗杰。费德勒技艺精湛。“我在比赛中很少犯错误，因此我总能获胜。”
费德勒很喜欢狮子。他说:“狮子很强大，其他动物无法击败它们。因此我也想成为一头'狮子'”